Nice video with some good shots. However, I don't think the sound tracks went all that well with the footage. I don't mean any disrespect by that as I've been warned myself for using popular songs and tunes on YouTube.
I think rib and PWC videos are improved significantly if there's a human interest element and to that end dialogue or commentary is sometimes as effective as good music. Take a look at this video of some American jet skiers. I think it ticks all the right boxes: good shots, good music and a clear person-centred story. Also, notice the number of hits. No video of mine has more than 30K hits despite all my advice.